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Victorious

Whispers held underneath
the mistletoe;

silencing the green atmosphere
and bonding the candle flames.

As the gifts are being presented
and the party is in celebration,
we stand together -

Waiting
For the moment.

One step closer, and I succeed -
your face now in my palms.

I smile.
The winter cold cannot even chill
the warmth rising to your cheeks.

My fingers run past the decoration
placed in your pine scented hair.

Not another minute to spare. . .

With a kiss that tastes like fruitcake,

I make a sweet victory at last.

Author notes

Option Two. Word Bank.

Words used:

Celebrate
Pine

Fruitcake
Winter

Mistletoe
Cold

Party
Green

decoration
Candle

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  • harleychick
    January 26, 2009

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    great job

    I love this poem I can see the whole scene in my head, I love the ending with kiss and fruitcake..Kudos!!!!!!


  • The Luna Diviner
    December 31, 2008
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    Awesome


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Aw I am so pleased I got to read this most beautiful poem
    I love the feel your words painted
    the delicate touch and that smile
    Love you hun
    Julie xxx


  • A x e l
    December 11, 2008
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    Hmmm~!

    I love your writing....
    Always have. Good luck~

    Love always,
    Axel


  • KateMadness
    December 11, 2008

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    Olalala

    I absolutely love it, Marly! It's a perfect way to think about the holiday season. Now I want to make out with the nearest person...o.o


  • daviscth
    December 11, 2008

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    You did a wonderful job with this word bank dear. Your imagery is very clear and the words are so romantic. Good luck in the contest.


  • Saraia
    December 10, 2008
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    What is it with your work that just makes me aww and turn all squiggly inside?

    <3
    Another wonderful write I must say
    It puts the reader in the position of a christmas party under the mistletoe with the one they cherish.

    Wonderful, darling, simply fabulous.

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