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Forecast for Romance

What a dreary conversation
that has evoked my appetite

In the mist of your inquiry
my heart spread wings in flight

It was you that I've been
searching for all of my life

what a crazy place to finally
meet my future wife

How ironic that I should find you
in the clouds of my contentment

without thunder roaring or lights
flashing, you've become my endearment

Can we take this conversation
to a candlelight dinner for two

Where we can get better acquainted
because I've fallen in love with you

Author notes

The idea behind this poem is that love and romance
can come at any time in our mundane existence.
Sometimes we feel that there must be some
spectacular event or happening when love comes.
This piece takes a dreary day in the life of two
people and transforms it into a day that they will
remember for the rest of their lives.

See link below for image prompt
4) http://manalou.deviantart.com/art/What-a-Dreary-Conversation-105479777

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Comments


  • Manda-Lou
    December 11, 2008
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    Wonderful Job.

    It wasn't something I had expected to come out of my photograph, so well done. I enjoyed it!


  • Susan John Francis
    December 11, 2008
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    Beautiful and right , any day can unfold into a delight....

  • meena krish
    December 10, 2008

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    This is beautifully penned and I like the way how
    this poem unfolds. The rhyme and rhythm of it was
    just perfect. Good luck in the contest..take care.


  • cre8tiv-writer
    December 10, 2008
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    Beautiful