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All I want for christmas

cuddling up and keeping warm
drinking apple cider is the norm
watching the fire burn with delight
everything feels just right
carols being sung
stockings being hung
one wish i have to keep me from being blue
this christmas all i want is you
brinning in the new year
with wiskey and beer
sharing in that new years kiss
that for sure is on my check list
but baby i mean it when i say
nothing else will matter on this day
watching the night turn to midnight hue
baby all i want for christmas is you

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D. b

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  • Ignis Corpus
    December 23, 2008

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    Awe, this is the cutest Christmas poem that I've ready by far. It's all lovey dovey. =D I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

    Converse Queen


  • Truetome
    December 13, 2008
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    sweet Christmas wish.


  • Haygood gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    An enjoyable read

    I also have that title. It wasn't hard to come up with. Your poem is longer and really good. I do like a good rhyme.


  • avidd
    December 11, 2008

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    I know the feeling of not really wanting any presents just a certain person next to you. I prefer rhyming over free style too makes it sound better.


  • Brilliant Blonde22
    December 11, 2008
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    So beautiful! i loved it!

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