Graced orb of beauty in darkness surround
Below you we dance in your glow.
Hear our chant for prosperity found
In green time or new fallen snow.
The essance of man is measured in mind
but yours is measured in deeds
Most are oblivious to your power over earth
Will we grow flowers or will we grow weeds?
The sea churns to your steady climb
Over the planet below.
The calender turns as you disappear
and then continue to grow.
Man has forgot what the earth has not
O Goddess of an earlier times
That you rule the world with your pull of the sea
and beauty I hope all will find!
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A contest entry
- The Moon by Dragonbabyx3.
1000 points, ended December 23, 2008, 27 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Beautifully done!!!
Great narrative with a nice bouncy rhyme scheme & flow that enchanted & enthralled throughout...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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a fitting tribute
to mother earth and the moon, a chanting essence flows through the piece -
That is beautiful.
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Amazing!!
omg!! this is awesome!! great rhyming, magnificent description, and it even adds a hint of a moon deity. LOVE IT!!!
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spell check essence...
We just had the brightest full moon for 15 years... -
Think "times" should be "time"?
LOVE IT!! Beautiful imagery, a delightful piece of praise for such a wonder as the moon. Best of luck in the contest! You shan't need it.
S
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Wonderful, Brilliant! This is truly a lovely piece! I loved reading this, The imagery is captivating, and your Rhyme is beautiful! The flow was perfect! Thankyou for entering my contest, and Good Luck!
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thumbs up
well done my friend
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