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The Dominatrix

Long auburn hair past her shoulders
wearing black leather
stiletto fuck me boots
and a black leather bodice
cut just to cover her nipples
with slits down both sides
in front and down the back
stopping just short of her pussy.

Bright red candy apple lipstick
on her full sensual lips
ready to leave red rings around a cock.

Bright candles sitting atop black lace
on every hard surface in the dark room
leather straps fastened to the head and foot boards
of the four poster bed
awaiting the one who will soon be sprawled there.

Black horsehair whip in one hand
good for teasing and whipping both
Glass of blood red wine in the other
sipping and savoring as she waits.

Soon the bedroom door creaks open
and her lover stands naked before her
his beautiful body looks even more
amazing in the candle light
shadows dancing on his skin.

As he walks past her towards the bed
she turns to look at his hard ass
smacking it with the whip and enjoying
the small yelp that escapes his lips.

He sits just on the edge of the bed
taking in the room, the leather straps
looking at her from head to toe and
admiring the outfit, just barely leaving
anything to the imagination.

She walks up standing between his legs
the horsehair whip dangling and teasing his cock
as he reaches for her breasts, she smacks his hand away
telling him that he must not touch her
until she says it is ok, for tonight
HE is HER toy to do with as she sees fit.

He looks almost heartbroken until his eyes meet hers
and he sees that devilish glint in her eyes
and the sly, sexy smile form on her red lips
and he relaxes into his submissive form
asking her what he can do to make it up.

She lifts a stiletto heal to his chest
pushing him back hard on the bed
leaving behind a small red indention on his chest
and quickly binds his arms to the bed post
moving gracefully towards his feet, her whip
trailing down his body, she straps his feet in place.

She sees to her amusement that his cock is beginning to stir
she smacks the whip across his chest watching
the welps rise like his cock and the whimper that
escapes his lips excites her even more.

She leans ever so close to his growing cock
letting her tongue just barely flick across the head
teasing wanting him to beg for more
she stops suddenly, crawling on top of him
the slits in her bodice allowing her pussy
to rub against his now engorged cock.

She asks him harshly if he wants more
as he nods his head in reply as her
whip connects with his chest again
bringing more welps to the surface
telling him she could not hear him, did he want more?
between the moans of pleasureable pain, he manages
a loud yelp of yes please I want more.

She smiles to herself as she continues
to rock her pussy back and forth his cock
watching him squirm, she knows he wants inside
but she is enjoying her game too much
leaning over she runs her tongue across his lips
as they part slightly unsure of what he is supposed to do
she nips at his bottom lip with her teeth
hearing him moan and feeling his cock
jump against her at the sensation of her bite.

She moves down his chest, takes a nipple into her mouth
sucking and biting, her tongue trails across his chest
to the other side where she does the same to the other nipple
her tongue making a warm trail down and across his body
her hair tracing her movements causing him to shudder.

She reaches his cock again teasing the tip
before sliding her red lips down his shaft
leaving a blood red trail behind her
as he lifts his head slightly to see
he wants to watch her mouth sliding
over his cock, her tongue performing her magic
he always loved the way she gives head
and as her eyes look up to meet his, she stops.

Asks him if he is enjoying the show
to which he replies with an eager yes
please I want to cum for you.
She sits up straight and tells him
he will not cum until she tells him too
not before and not after only when she says.

He wonders to himself how in the hell he
will accomplish that feat hoping against all hope
that she will not prolong his exctasy
he lies back on the bed waiting, wanting more
wondering what is coming next, he hears a buzz
and opens his eyes to see her with a vibrator
he watches in amazement as she places it against
his balls, the sensation causing him to gasp as her mouth
again covers his hard bulging cock.

She feels his balls begin to tighten against the vibrator
and knowing he cannot hold out much longer
she climbs back on top of him, just the tip of his cock
against her wet pussy, she slides down painfully slow
until he is completely inside her, she slides back up,
again so just the tip is at her pussy lips, sliding back
slowly again as he cries out in lust.

This time she pulls back to the top
and quickly slams back down
until his cock is completely impaled in her
this time they both cry out in passion
she rides his cock hard and deep
wanting him to cum now, wanting to cum
herself but not telling him, she wants to see
just how long he can last as she reaches up
grabbing his nipples and twisting, pinching.

His eyes almost rolling back into his head
from such pain yet more pleasure than he has
ever known and watches as she leans forward
releasing the straps around his wrists, her hard erect
nipples just inches from his mouth, he forgets what he
was told earlier and sucks between his lips
watching her face and surprised to see she
doesn't stop him, instead, she throws her head back
and continues fucking him, harder and faster.

Her pussy now dripping with wetness
his beautiful painted red cock throbbing
inside her and against her clit
she reaches back and places the vibrator
against his balls once more and as she feels
the vibration in her pussy as well, they
explode at exactly the same moment.

Now her eyes roll back into her head
as she collapses on top of him
her hair falling across his face and
he inhales deeply loving the smell of her
perfume, shampoo and their sex.

She whispers in his ear, "thank you baby
for making my fantasy come true,
you were wonderful my love".
As he wraps his arms around her tightly
his love for her will not allow him to speak
so he whispers to himself, "not nearly as wonderful
as you were and are my forever love".



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  • Oh my god! That made me hot! This is a very well written piece. I am very impressed with this one. I would like to try it. I mean, really!


  • Swtpoetryman
    December 19, 2008

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    A VERY EROTIC EVENING, INDEED!

    The only thing that could have made it better is if you sat on your lovers face after he had cum inside you for his tongue and mouth to lick you clean and to another orgasm - and another - and another, and another ..........

    This made me want to cum and stroke BUT as you said in this piece this fellow wouldn't cum until you said so - and so that is the way that it will be for me, too.

    I'm looking forward and hoping to hear from you!

    Peace & Love!
    Earl.

    And keep these HOT & KINKY pieces cumming.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    This is great hon glad to see you write some erotica again you know how much my perverted self likes it!!!!!


  • Andiness
    December 12, 2008

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    Very erotic, you most certitly have a gift with words!! I'll have to keep an eye on you, because I know that I want to read some more of these!!!

    -Pet


  • gllarso
    December 11, 2008
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    OMG, this is very descriptive and erotic. When is it my turn in the straps?


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 11, 2008

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    My mind just kind of opened to some kind of fantasy that i don't think i will ever wanna get out, keep it flowing.


  • cre8tiv-writer
    December 10, 2008
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    ♥ GO GIRL!!! ♥

    You are representing well for the Dom-femme!!!! This was sexy to say the least!!!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 10, 2008
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    HHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTT!!!1

    WHHHEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWW!!!!1 damn...yeah..what a trip!! excellent..


    • sensualbutterfly
      December 10, 2008
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      I take it you liked the piece! LOL! Always love your comments they are encouraging to say the least!


  • moluv10
    December 10, 2008
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    Very HOTT!! Steamy piece here! I love it! Keep on writing!

    • sensualbutterfly
      December 10, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment! I shall keep writing if they bring in the comments this one did! Thanks again always appreciated

  • mcfreeman
    December 10, 2008
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    Beat me baby...eight to the bar

    any time I would be your fantasy


  • carl dunford
    December 10, 2008

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    Wow !!! and wow!! That is one hell of a write,
    super sexy ,and erotic just like ,the writer,
    a super fantasy!

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