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Ode to Selene

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Mellow ethereal silver sphere
Of crystal, weightless and serene,
Open me, I'm cleansed of fear,
Now, this night, shine on, Selene.

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Selene = Greek Goddess of the Full Moon
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  • Eusebius
    December 26, 2008

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    An excellent and mucical piece! my only criticism is that it is TOO short!! again, most well done in every regard!


  • Dragonbabyx3
    December 10, 2008

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    One thing I have learned here at AP, Most acrostic poems, are full of imagery, and beauty, Yours is no different. I really enjoyed the imagery and flow of this piece, Thankyou for entering my contest, and Good Luck!