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Crows

Circling
Black
Crows

Claiming
Their
Meat

Scavenging
Their
Prey

Tearing
Off
Flesh

Red
Blood
Dripping

Devouring
Every
Mouthful

Only
Bones
Remain

First Poem In Over A Year And A Half!

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Psycho Dancer ---
    August 21
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    thank you, means a lot


  • Just Myself
    August 19
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    Very Detailed

    I could see this poem play out in my head very awasome write I enjoyed readig it

  • Psycho Dancer ---
    May 13
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    oh wow - thanks!!

  • Eusebius
    May 12

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    Frankly this is really a very good poem (and I'm who does not like poems with only a single word per line) you have done a magnificent job here, in lesser poetical hands than yours the poem would be a disaster. Bravo!