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Love Story.

Skin so light, like his eyes.
With dark hair to match his heart.
He looks so happy, but She can hear his cries.
They can't keep their eyes apart.

He approached Her with a shy air.
She looked so innocent and helpless.
He asked her out with happiness He hoped She would share.
She answered with a grin and her address.

He wakes up in an unfamiliar place.
He decides He is in a dream.
He awakens again, and tears run down his pale face.
This is a dream.. If only this was a dream.

Dead.
He said the word again.
But he wouldn't believe it, it's all in his head.
Say it again.

Why Her? She's so beautiful, innocent... dead.
This is not real, he said to himself as his tears grew.
It's my fault... he bled.
But your not going anywhere without me, too.


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  • Sir Squigglim
    December 14, 2008
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    This is so sad and beautiful.... it's extremely well done, you have no idea.


  • xXcrimsionrosesXx
    December 12, 2008
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    this is raelly good i love it!!


  • BreeAnne
    December 11, 2008

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    amazing.
    when i start writing, i blank for awhile because i can never seem to get my words to sound the way that i want them to, you know?
    but this is amazing=