Wasted breath
Wasted time
All on you
I loved you once
Never again
I made the biggest mistake of my life
Saying I love you
You toyed with my heart
Played with my head
Made me your own personal rag doll
How am I suppose to feel about that?
You never cared
Didn't even give me the time a day
Yet here you are begging I will take you back
Go back to your little whores
I know I don't want you
I'd rather choke on my own blood
Sad huh that it resorted to this
My broken heart
Your lost game
This is the end
Of your little game
You lose
Get over it
Author notes
To my ex
A contest entry
- Pissed Love by Hateful Apathy.
2200 points, ended December 14, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WASTED not waisted lol
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I changed it
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waisted is spelt wrong-should be wasted.
other than that-its raw and bitter.
which is exactly what this contest is asking for i think
nice
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I changed it
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Very nice, and to the point. I do find it rather odd, and somewhat evil on everyone's part that I am getting (you being the ninth) all these poems just TODAY. Wow, give me a break.
Anyways, good write. Liked it. Hope you enjoy the pre-closing finals list. 
I hear they have free airline miles. We'll never know. Well, you might, but I won't. 
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lol thank you so much
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