As we know the wheels reach the end of the drive,
we stop to stare into the deep, longing eyes of the other.
We take no time to waste,
for we need to find the time to waste instead.
We never want to leave.
Ever.
We barely know how to make each other pleased,
but we know each other well enough to make them happy.
We share a bonded heart long lost,
but now reunited in the most encryptic place.
We just know the sweet hugs don't measure up.
So we decided to leave,
Walk to the edge,
and make a commitment.
We kiss till content of the inexpirence,
but we know the kiss is just the begining.
We loved, and still do, each other.
Author notes
I'm not going to sugarcoat this cause this is about me and my boyfriend. We just wanted to be together for as long as we could when we first started dating. We have just become so close over the last 10 months, and I'm glad my first poem I have writen in awhile is for him 
Please tell me what you think
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Just reminding you! I want to ask you about this pome, and say other things!
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Its alright. There are some things I would have you change.. like its a little too long and its rather choppy! Other than that, its a wounderful piece. Get back to me please on this piece.. I have other things to say!
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