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By The Water





By the water, I like to go
though I haven't any boat;
of fishing, isn't much I know,
I just like to be close to the water

Tints of blue, perfectly pretty,
moments of tranquility,
glittering bright bits of mystery,
living things of simple complexity

Fish, like birds in a special sky;
plants that live a unique life,
shells with sparkling secrets held inside.

Playful Brown Pelicans diving,
Ospreys hunting in their own style,
snails spiraling; sunflowers decorating
and stabilizing the sands.

I can swim or float in fine fluidity,
by the water, essentially,
whether river, lake or sea,
most of all, I like to BE
(and likely write some poetry)


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  • happy-lil-artemis
    December 15, 2008
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    good job


  • Wind Walker
    December 12, 2008

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    Wonderful

    Makes me want to be there too
    also brings back memories of when I was there
    good luck in the contest
    Happy Holidays
    Wind Walker