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Abandoned

You left me broken and used
crying and confused, I was lost and forgotten
With thoughts twisted and tangled
words left unspoken
A heart deeply damaged beyond repair
Love given to one who could not care
A disease that seems rare, a disease that is not fair
A hand gone unheld
a love that failed
Tears upon my face, from not feeling your loving embrace
Lips that long for your touch
a heart in need of much
Days go by and still your goodbye echos in my head
A new love yet I dread
Has my love for others become dead?

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  • FaerieNWonderland
    December 11, 2008

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    this is so great!
    we can never know the full effect of a broken heart.
    that baggage always seems to creep up on us when we least expect it.
    this is a trully amazing write.

    your Faerie