What's happened to me?
What went wrong?
Is this how life is to be?
Is this really my life?
Not sure I'm still here.
It all feels so strange.
Like I'm just existing,
barely surviving
like a pawn in a twisted game of chess
no control over anything
stuck,no way out
feeling empty
a shell
destined for hurt
lonely
misunderstood.
A contest entry
- Eye Full Of Tears (( Picture Prompt )) by HereComesTheSun.
550 points, ended December 15, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Reality vs. Illusions by Suicide Hotline.
700 points, ended December 28, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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it has emotion, and it has some thought and i understand were your comming from, thanks for the write =)
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Thanks!!! Glad you liked it!!!
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a very great write it just really overflows with emotion an pain
great work expressing yourself -
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Sometimes expressing myself is difficult. Alot of people don't really understand. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank You for commenting.
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welcome to allpoetry
there is a lot of pain tied up in this, the questioning kind. I think you did a great job with this, keep up the writing,and good luck in the contests.
cheers
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I Love AP !!! Glad you liked my poem. Sorry it took so long for me to thank you for commenting. I procrastinate too much. The AP is such a great place. I've met so many wonderful people. I've learned to write in different ways. This place has been a blessing !!! I LOVE IT HERE !!!
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I can relate alot to this poem, there have been so many times through my life growing up and feeling exactly what you wrote in this... great job! Thank you!
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Finally !!! Last comment I have to respond to. And of course it's you
I'm so thankful that we met TTYL Dear Friend
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