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Just Hold Me

Just hold me
tightly in your arms
with nothing sexual involved
can you do that
Just hold me?

Just love me
for who I am
and not who you want me to be
is that possible
to just love me?

Just share with me
your thoughts and dreams
fears and fantasies
and really listen to mine
is that something you are willing to do
just share with me?

Just be my friend
be there when I need a shoulder
for mine is always clear for you
is that something you can be
just be my friend?

Just be my lover
making love to my body
mind, heart and soul
for I will always be yours
is that too much to ask
to just be my lover?

Just let me complete you
with words and feelings
gentle touches and love
I want you to feel what I feel
because YOU COMPLETE ME

Please tell me what you think

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  • carl dunford
    December 10, 2008
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    A beautifull poem , I think the answer to your questions ,
    is yes!!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 10, 2008
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    this is so..

    tender and sweet, not surprisingly penned by one who is just the same.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 10, 2008

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    kind of makes me look at my bed and know that i will be in it alone tonight, this is a warm poem something that i can only dream about, keep it flowing