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Morning Routine

Airborne clusters in calico hues of gold,
beneath the table scampering so bold.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 17, 2008
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    Hood-Winked!

    This sounds like a lovely couplet I couldn't make heads or tails of it, but it sounds good nonetheless ... it makes me think of cat fur flying after a cat had been running around - but that could be because I had a cat called Calico when I was little

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 17, 2008

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    Hood Wink!

    Thought provoking ~

    There is no way I could figure this out but I do like a good riddle


    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Nice! Could be seen in so many different ways. Beautifully penned, good luck in the contest with it


  • Melodies
    December 10, 2008

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    There are five cats under your table, plus one old dog and your mother wears a very pretty and colorful apron.

    This is what it's like at your house for breakfast. I love it, you can tell.