Airborne clusters in calico hues of gold,
beneath the table scampering so bold.
Author notes
Please feel free to interpret!!
In a list
A contest entry
- Two lines that rhyme and mean absolutely nothing by Melodies.
650 points, ended December 11, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think, but kindly, please.
Comments
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Hood-Winked!
This sounds like a lovely couplet
I couldn't make heads or tails of it, but it sounds good nonetheless ... it makes me think of cat fur flying after a cat had been running around - but that could be because I had a cat called Calico when I was little 
Keep writing
Polly

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Hood Wink!
Thought provoking ~
There is no way I could figure this out
but I do like a good riddle 
♥
Stay safe
~Manda


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Nice! Could be seen in so many different ways. Beautifully penned, good luck in the contest with it


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There are five cats under your table, plus one old dog and your mother wears a very pretty and colorful apron.
This is what it's like at your house for breakfast.
I love it, you can tell. 






