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The Emptiness of the Cold and the Fufilling Feeling of the Warmth

You don’t know the pain,
The never ending screams that plague my thoughts.
Deprived of the warmth,
And left outside in the cold.
Slowly decaying,
But still so frozen. 
The core of my soul has been pierced by your bullet,
But it never was a clear break,
Lodged in there forever,
It is worse than dying.
I will never forget.

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I need you. Can't you realize that?

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  • Truthful Sinner
    December 22, 2008

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    Damn good choice of words sweetheart this is a good write and u seem like a good writer, keep up the good work.


  • silver-X-lining gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    my god...
    duuuuuude....
    your writing got even better during your absence.
    this is awesome, I &hearts it. Especially the last four lines.


    Well penned, daughter....

    ~HH


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 10, 2008

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    a cold poem that opens the heart to a kind of pain that could nearly kill it, amazing poem, keep it flowing