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ancients

ancient filigree
hieroglyphics on a wall
lone writer thrills me

A contest entry

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    December 17, 2008
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    Nice work with this Senryu. You have captured the Aha moment beautifully and owned this prompt. Well done.

    I enjoyed this very much and have such awe for those who can write Senryu and Haiku well.

    I cannot - however, I know a goodie when I read one.

    Excellent. Just excellent. ~Pamela


  • Hikari Lady
    December 10, 2008
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    Loved this, good luck in the contest.