I look at you, then you look at me,
Then my vision turns into a bloodred sea.
Author notes
Ahaha can you figure it out ?
A contest entry
- Two lines that rhyme and mean absolutely nothing by Melodies.
650 points, ended December 11, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think. Be critical
Comments
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OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH!
I think the meaning is that you got punched in the nose!
Sorry 'bout that.
BUT, that's life.



