She cant remember my name anymore
although I go to visit every week
Alzeimers has taken control
please sign here says the man in white at the door
He lets me in and resets the alarm
Its only a short walk before I arrive
Hello Nana I say,
She stares blankly into space
I take her hand in mine and tell her about my day
its ever so cold outside I tell her
Christmas is just around the corner
we've chosen a tree
Nana says nothing
her face almost emotionless
but her eyes twinkle
and its this little glimmer of hope
that makes my day and keeps me going
Its her smile within her frown
A contest entry
- Swiftness by Ken-Maverick.
700 points, ended December 13, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very nicley done
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it is such a cruel disease, robbing one of dignity and memories... my heart goes out to you
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JUDGED!
I like how you personified this,
Definately a unique take on the prompt
Well done
All the best to you in the contest
Ken -
That's So Sad...
I know how hard this is..my aunt for 5 years was in a coma, before that, in major depression, I always looked for the bright side, but if I'm totally honest, I never seen one.. My heart goes out to you and yours. I admire your efforts. Love your brother Timothy
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Awwww..this was so sweet. A very simple yet touching poem. Wonderful take on the prompt. All the very best to you in the contest.
Love
Alyzeh
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