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Take us up

Woulnt it be great? Wouldnt it be fine? If we were all taken up NOW, but NOT one at a time? All of us at once, together we would fly... no one would have to pretend that it wouldnt be good to die.... but it is good to live or so most claim...but "giving up now isnt an option"..... what a lie.

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Ok this poem was VERY random. The thoughts hit me so fast I couldnt think of a proper title. So keep that in mind.

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  • Engaged
    December 10, 2008

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    you need to change the font color because more people than you want will get pissy about it and never read your poems again. beleive me, it happens!