To hold you as one united from two
Catch your tears when despair is what you catch
Dew on my shoulders from you falling dew
Attach soul to your heart at pain's attach
Eyes to stare admiring your stunning eyes
Touch your face for you to feel love's warm touch
Rise to firmness when the sun fails to rise
Clutch you tight to release you from pain's clutch
Smile to paint on your lovely face a smile
Tears of compassion when your face fills with tears
Isle of peace when you retreat to your isle
Ears to hear lonely sounds echoed in your ears
Love I offer to you anytime my love
Dove of God descends to you as a dove
Author notes
As much as I would desire to be such a passionate and gorgeous woman's AP lover, my convictions will only allow me to be an AP Male Best Friend
Written in the Shadow Sonnet Form invented by the incredibly beautiful and talented Amera M. Andersen.
In a list
A contest entry
- ARE YOU MAN ENOUGH? by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended December 16, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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excellent~
Beautiful
Wonderful sonnet....
So full of emotion
Best of luck in the contest
This looks like a winner in my book
Love n hugs
Susan~~~
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You are such a master of shadow sonnets, my dear friend. This is such a lovely, personal write. I'm touched. I truly believe in your sincerity and would be honored to have you as a best friend. Thank you so much for entering my contest. Good luck!
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