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Roses

The pretty roses posin' in the window sill
Breathing lighly, not a sound or gill

A contest entry

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  • Melodies
    December 10, 2008

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    Ah.... OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHH! HUMMMMMMMMM! Well, the meaning of this poem is that your goldfish died and you buried him in a flower pot. YAY! You did it, you did it.


  • Glenn
    December 10, 2008

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    lol lol lol and lol some more, this is so funny, you really have a creative sense of humour, i almost envy you, nice write, thanks for the chuckle
    hope your cold enough, they say its set to be colder tomorrow,
    Good luck in the contest