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A Smile Within A Frown

Composed reservations reside

Contemplating feelings within

Passionate cries

Eat away the nervousness of my heart

Leaving me almost empty

Yet somehow

I still have

A smile within a frown  

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  • Ken-Maverick
    December 13, 2008

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    JUDGED!

    Wonderful take on the prompt
    Well done on this

    All the best to you in the contest

    Ken


  • Amera gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    This is a beautiful poem, you have expressed the emotion perfectly in just a short verse.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Alyzeh
    December 11, 2008

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    This was simple and to the point but with I can tell its been written with strong feelings. Wonderful imagery! All the very best to you!

    Love
    ALyzeh