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sensual eruptions

Feel the passions of my desire,
as your  fingers entwine locking,
us into a escape of ecstasy,
caressing my sensual curbs,
with every moments embrace,

as you tease my silky attire ,

with your mind body and soul,

I am your's take me where you,

will for our  breathtaking thrill.

Author notes

3) Write a sensual/erotic poem of any kind.I dont normally do sensual but I thought why not
image credit anymaoni
7) Create a sensual/erotic background incorporating my username.

A contest entry

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 6
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    wow

    steamy, n dreamy.. yeah em where you will..


  • Swtpoetryman
    December 11, 2008

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    SWEET AND SENSUAL to say the least!

    Sensual & Sweet, Baby - and that's just the way this naughty boy loves and likes it!

    Anyone in the mood for a 'breathtaking thrill - this evening! Meet me at HUBBARD'S HILLS and we'll make the moon blush! HE! HE! HE!

    Good Luck in the contest!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Alyzeh
    December 11, 2008

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    Oh wow! This was too hot and sensual Maralisa and a matching background to go with it! Good work!

    All the best to you
    always
    Alyzeh


  • daviscth silver member
    December 11, 2008

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    You did a wonderful job creating this and the imagery is breathtaking. I like the title too, it's perfect for it.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Very sensual! Neat read hun, love the background to, awesome work! Good luck in the contest


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    New style for you hun and wow you are amazing
    I loved it so much and hope now you are more inspired and confident to write this way
    Best wishes and good luck
    Julie x


  • Desire gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    Oh My Word~


    -drops licorice-

    Oy!!! I had to do a double take for I saw this sensual-passionate bg and was like-
    Woot!
    I also read Your comments in the AC- and was like...
    You are so right

    Heck why not give a whirl

    Hot!!!
    and Love the poem too
    I fell into Your words and bumped into a few walls
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Brush~

    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Zenda-Lokki silver member
    December 10, 2008

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    A breathtaking poem penned with love and affection. I especially liked the ryhme at the end. Thank you so much for your entry Maralisa xx Good luck hun xx


  • Hikari Lady
    December 10, 2008

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    This is indeed sensual, very much. lol. Liked your use of words and it brings passion into view. Good luck in the contest.

    ~Noor


  • penman gold member
    December 10, 2008
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    Excellent

    Another excellent creation. So very well done Best of luck in the contest.


  • SubKitten
    December 10, 2008

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    Very nicely done. Not over done with details or anything, just a nice, simple, sensual piece. Good luck!


  • chilali
    December 10, 2008

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    Ooh! Very sensual indeed. I loved the softness in this piece. A great write. I also loved the rhyme in the end. Good luck in the contest

    Much love
    Ylova

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