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Dairy...

Dear dairy

I have been waiting
For you to speak… years
And years, I have told you
So many things… said-un-said
You know them all,
Yet you never told anything.

I have been wondering
How people became more and
More prominent in you…
Weren’t you supposed to be?
All about me?

And I prefer to hide you
From others, while there is
More of them… Is it moral?
Or even if it’s possible?
To hide people from themselves.

Please tell me what you think

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