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A world of mine

A love within hate
A word within silence
Its so loud I can't even hear myself think
A smile within a frown
A laugh within a cry
This is how its suppose to be
When your life is stuck alone
Afraid to lose whats already been lost
This isn't right

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  • Ken-Maverick
    December 13, 2008

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    JUDGED!!

    Interesting take you've penned
    You took the prompt and did it justice
    Well done

    All the best to you in the contest

    Ken