Intertwined souls beneath
Nights filled with stars,
Holding close dreams
Of twilight embrace
Between lovers.
Beating hearts drumming
Overtures of desire,
Kemm idum sakemm habb?
Author notes
Sorry if the last line makes no sense..... I tried to find the Maltese translation for:
"How long until love?"
Poem about those wonderful moments before the three words "I love you" are spoken between two people.
In a list
A contest entry
- Inhobbok Acrostics. by Poetryintheblood.
575 points, ended December 15, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, this is beautiful...
Sensual, soft & tender yet passionate, provocotive & enticing...
So much expressed so eloquently in so few lines...
Seriously impressive piece...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Oh My! What a wonderful read this is! It reminds of a day a while back... You know what I mean. This is fantastic! I love how you did this one! I think it may be my new favorite from you!
Best of luck in this contest honey!
and love
Nyetta
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Thank you for your beautiful interpretation of Inhobbok, and the last line makes very good sense to me, so thank you for going through the effort to look it up, good luck in my contest, Josie
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and its love that sets us free totally thank you for reminding me
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bful and when tought and reflected
that the hidden connection of love and its always there
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