I see a light in my intangible darkness
I am desperate to escape...
but I have been deceived before
the bright light comes closer
killing the dark all around me
I finally see what’s been holding me
in this dark prison
nothing...
I am stuck here on my own accord
I slowly walk toward this unknown light
noticing its humanlike silhouette
I wrap my arms around this strange figure
I am not afraid
and feel the warmth
as my loneliness fade
when I let go I look around
I can finally see what was once my nightmare
Is no longer dark
I see my savior in front of me smiling
and I see his face...
I can’t help but smile
tears welling in my eyes
it’s only someone I’ve grown quite fond of
my savior
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ok, so i didnt comment this, and everyone loves creeper-friends xD Wow, ok, i love this, i dont understand why you have me as a collaborator on it, but i love it. The images, the emotions. . .
and the ending is beautiful! i like the hope in this. . dont lose sight of that hope! 
love ya
~n
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A sweet ending, I loved this poem with its uplifting feeling. Indeed, we are our ownselves saviors, we can save ourself easier than when people try to. You've penned this thought and fact very smoothly. Thanks for sharing.
~Noor
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thank you so much! ive edited just a bit just now lol
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