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Little Message In a Bottle

Those hearts are fragmented with distant calls
Saline deposits do procreate the ocean
The waves do carry sentiment, seeking possession
Wanting increases with the inevitable ebbs and flows
For the ocean apprehends dreams can come true x 


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  • Raining Kisses silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    HEY THIS IS A REALLY CLASSIC PIECE OF WORK, POETRY OF THE HIGHEST CALLABRE THIS IS EXCELLENT, IF IT WERE A PAINTING I WOULD HANG IT N MY WALL
    THANKS


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    A lovely poem
    Love the feelings that flow
    Thank you and best wishes
    Julie