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Miracles Happen

 

 

Secrets drape covers of tranquil silence
onto protective sheaths;

nurturing a valued mystery


Beauty worthy of appreciation
reflects a miraculous master plan
-formation of a breathing creature-

From rigid outdoors to
perfectly polished circular treasures

 

We are made aware,

 

"True beauty lies under
                  hard skins"

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt - "A smile within a frown"
50 words more or less

Hard covers, soft insides. That's what my first thought was when I read the prompt.

Photo credits: http://kuunsilta.deviantart.com/art/Shell-and-pearl-40303562

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  • nilav
    January 2

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    finding the inner beauty is miracle ...finding the real beauty of a poem is also a miracle ...hiding so much beauty in those words is also a miracle...


  • Meroza
    December 18, 2008

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    This poem so deserved its gold, and I adore every single word you have penned and the meaning you hide in it all, I do agree so with you on the last line.

    Well done and best of luck!


  • Venugopal gold member
    December 14, 2008

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    so true, deserved gold and you got it
    "True beauty lies under
    hard skins"




  • Ken-Maverick
    December 13, 2008

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    JUDGED!!!

    This was well worth the wait, poet
    "True beauty lies under
    hard skins"
    What an ending line.
    Excellent write indeed

    All the best to you in the contest

    Ken


  • chilali
    December 13, 2008

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    Superb!

    Wow. What an amazing take on the prompt Alyzeh. You know what this is? No? Well, let me tell you. It is GOLD! Ken is going to love this. I know he will Why do I even enter contests when you are participating in them! Hahaha. Great work love. I absolutely loved every part of this poem from the starting line to the finish. It was a stunningly beautiful write. Good luck in the contest, not that you need it.

    Much love and best wishes,
    Ylova

  • chilali
    December 10, 2008
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    Let me know when this is done as well

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