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Peep This( Live Video) Freestyle Poetry

Peep This ( Live Video )

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

Come here baby

and let me slip this love mickey

in your ear,

and let me speak reassurance

to that rolling tear.

I am the right love path to the goals

of the old school pot holes

you’re trying to fulfill.

But peep this,

I have a list full of home girl

sophisticated twist.

I hiss that gorilla shriller

that is for sure, a go getter.

As I crip walk that four letter word

down your tonsils,

making my ghetto American bandstand.

Peep this quick freestyle

that is tricked out

with the closet lights off,

I am chic fly ballistic

with a hiss that is a bad mamma jam

shut your mutha fucken mouth.

Can you shh... for a quick moment

and peep this.

While I slit your throat with my tongue

and let the freaky shit go

on and on and bring the moan hook

right back.

I am trying to change your erection

to my last name.

And your restless nights to damn!

She drives me insane.

Just sniff up my thick white cocaine

and go bankrupt on backstrokes.

Peep this, I have on my head of the game

black sun shades that was bought by

my peeps kickin it in the card game

killing the spades.

This flavor I spice up is a secret ingredient

that is sold, and not to be told.

I am giving you the top of my dome poetry freestyle

so don’t touch that dial.

But call up my digits,

crazy

revolutionary explicitly nice

international

party poetry girl soldier.

Putting out the smoke,

as I crow damn,

did you peep how I did this gansta shit. .

 

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

 

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Peep This( Live Video) Freestyle Poetry

I love this my writing is not meant for everyone
i go with how i feel. I have like many personalities
and reva smith is one i never exposed but she is
a gansta fly type hood type person that is
beneath my bones_ smashin_ red cat
my guns are so cute my avatar

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  • Blaque01
    January 1, 2009
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    Oh shit

    Awesome...totallyawesome...u always leave wit my mouth hanging....this was nice.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Dammmmnnnnn!!!!!!!!

    You got my eyes rolling in the back of my dome, oh hell girl, I'm gonna pass on by and leave this one alone, for I can't touch this, damn girl you in the zone, and I know if anyone meets your clone, they leaving happy, but ain't never going home. Peep this, I Love this deep dish! You

    Mushy King.


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    December 11, 2008

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    hell yeah ma you flipped that shit gangsta loved it oooooohh damn that was just on point girl wit yo bad ass ma


  • moluv10
    December 10, 2008

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    This is hot! i see Reva got that gangsta pop to her. i'm lovin this hon. Keep on doin you and let your thoughts flow.


  • darell
    December 10, 2008

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    Omg!

    Baby this was like some real fly shit.
    I love Reva Smith to death. Can you
    introduce me to her someday? Really,
    you layed it done jazziriffic.lol
    I never get enough of your enthralling
    babygirl. Loving you for all eternity.
    your special darell


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    I love this hon!!!!! A great one here

    Just sniff up my thick white cocaine
    and go bankrupt on backstrokes.
    Peep this, I have on my head of the game
    black sun shades that was bought by
    my peeps kickin it in the card game
    killing the spades.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    Wicked...

    I like that you reveal your alter ego's yet remain true to the real deal, reva smith can kick it, lick, it, stamp, tramp and vamp it, I just about roared with your phraseology of you're gonna give that erection your last name; pleasure to listen to your lovely voice that is able to suffuse the hiss of the bad jam mamma so that she still sounds sultry


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      December 10, 2008
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      lol thanks Ms. Champ i be feelin so bad when you come read me but its me lol you never know what to expect out jewels i so appreciate it


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    DAMN!!!

    Yo, cat this is mad crazy hott!! l.o.l. you talked serious SHHi..!! l.o.l. you go wit yo bad ass self girl!!

  • mcfreeman
    December 10, 2008
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    A love micky....

    I gulp

  • Ms Sexy silver member
    December 10, 2008
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    now that's cute you know i had to peek

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