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Within me burns a dark secret
One that nobody knows
Something wild, crazy, sexy, untamed
A girl who is daring, and bold

There’s a hidden, alluring, nakedness
Not so far beneath these clothes
Wouldn’t you like to see, these depths of me
Wouldn't you like to know...

I want to be the sexy one
Something special to behold
Do you have what it takes to unleash me?
If I said, could you do what you’re told?

I’ll be a freak dominatrix
I will have total control
Once I am started…contain me?
Why would you want to though?

I’m not really one for leather, maybe lace?
Or let's play with silk instead?
Move a little closer, I don’t bite (or do I?)
Well one kiss gets me into your head

Then you will let me do what I want
And I’ll remind you so you don’t forget
That you will also do what I want
And...
You'll like it

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  • Ellis gold member
    August 28

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    I would have tamed you when eighteen
    Now sixty-eight, I'm not so mean
    I'd just love
    Not in you shove
    But you'd still know you are my queen

    haha...


  • Ken-Maverick
    April 1

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    The subtle hints of erotica is evident in this,
    loved the flow throught out, great piece

    Ken

    P.s Why the sigh? (I mean after reading my poem)

  • I really enjoyed this piece. Very dominating and exciting, well penned.


  • Amera gold member
    January 6

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    hehe.. This is great! I think you'll be a big hit with all the guys on the site with thinking like this.


    Love.
    Amera♥


  • AmazinJason
    December 21, 2008
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    sweet!
    i do like it!


  • AmberMoon
    December 11, 2008

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    This was cute. I liked it as you predicted. lol. I think we all have a secret person in us that we would like to unleash.

    much love,
    Sharon


    • Pisces Pieces
      December 12, 2008
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      Thank You Sharon! Your reads and comments are always much appreciated! I hope everything is going great there! I'll email soon, I wanted to respond to your email anyway, just gotta get to it. Miss talking to you!




  • CanadianGirl1
    December 11, 2008

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    ooh man... I dont know what to say. great write, and different for ya, but yeah i don't know what to say. hahaha...

    • Pisces Pieces
      December 11, 2008
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      Thanks! Just having some fun, sometimes it' s crazy what even one word or one line can inspire me to write. I like different sometimes

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