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The Corner of Tremont and Boylston

life among these sideways buildings
passes slowly
passes quickly
time is disconcerting here

shadows pooling
in the recesses that gather
all around
long and drawn out breathes
smoke another cigarette

happiness is deceiving
ever fleeting
windswept and mirage-like
is this feeling

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