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ashes

It’s our beginning in our end,
risen from the ashes humanities journey.

Men mere ashes returning to land
misunderstood minute man life’s

entirety has massed from mere ash
we stardust yearning for the return

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  • etoile
    December 12, 2008

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    great take on the prompt. I really like this and your imagery is great. this is nicely written and flows very well.
    my favourite part is the ending. great job.

    thanks for entering and goodluck