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My man

My man
i love you
like a mother who loves her unborn child

My man donde eres tu?

My man
I love you
like love which loves the love itself

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Donde eres tu?- where are you?

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  • rhondasail
    December 10, 2008

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    Searching, waiting...

    ...that's the sense I get from this short write, my dear friend. Like a mother loves her unborn child you wait for your "Man" to appear, to 'be born' to you...Wonderful yearning love poetry, Carolina...I have missed your breathtaking perspective on love...welcome back ...Peace, always, Rhonda


  • Ahkam silver member
    December 10, 2008

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    Sing to mee

    Hey, Nice to see you back.so now I am here, Donde eres tu?- Please write more, like zero , entity, nonety.


  • Hikari Lady
    December 10, 2008

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    First stanza is something I said word by word to someone who used to mean everything to me. This was wonderfully written. I really liked how you used a different language in the poem with english, gave it a more romantic feeling. Thanks for sharing.

    ~Noor