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Forever

We're friends, although I want to be more
do you still have feelings for me
or have those gone forever?
I trust you with my life, and you care so much,
so why don't you like me the way I want you to?
we are the best of friends, and I've liked you since we
met,
thats about 3 years, so why haven't you noticed me yet?
oh, what I wish I could tell you
but I know I'll be rejected...or will I?
I know you used to like me alot,
but I need to know how you feel
please, somehow let me know
so I can let you know how I have felt...forever

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Written February 7th, 2004

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  • Lioness
    November 8, 2005
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    hey, if you like him tell him. its the only way to know 100% weather or not a person likes you. rust me, i've done it many times.
    Lovies


  • Steph
    February 8, 2004
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    I think the poem was great. Alot of people can probaby relate to the friend who you wish was a little more than a friend. I had the same problem with a friend of 4 years. Now we are seeing eachother and hopefully things work out for the best. Good luck with your situation as well

  • SmOkeY14
    February 8, 2004
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    omg.....im speachless.....I feel this way with some guy I like....he used to have feelings for me but I still have feelings for him...and i dont know if he still has feelings for me.....keep up the good work and good luck with that guy...i hope it all works out....take care
    Desiree


  • mana FANA
    February 7, 2004
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    i used to feel like that, but then i finally just told him and now he's the love of my life. good luck. this poem is very sweet.

  • mystiza
    February 7, 2004
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    Great job

    awwww.... tear I know how you feel!

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