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I'll Never Be Sad

Pining, desiring
To be the best I can for you,
I do all that is in my being
Because I love you.
It’s feels great to be able to make you smile
And know that you are happy.
Your love and joy is a happiness to me that none can defile.
It brings peace to me
Knowing you are smiling for another day.
It fills my heart with joy, come what may.
So through it all, the good and bad,
I know that with you by my side, that I’ll never be sad.

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  • Hikari Lady
    December 10, 2008

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    Beautiful! I love your begining the most and your last line. Such a sweet write to write for someone we love.
    Thanks for sharing this, ti brightened my day.

    ~Noor

  • maneshacagney
    December 10, 2008
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    fine and simple

    Simple, very down to earth expression,
    diction and style ..ok