One little drop starts to fall down her arm
she loves it
so she does it more often
then she starts to fight with her parents
So she does it deeper and more often
Now its to get rid of the pain that has happened to her
Soon she is doing it everyday
One day she passes out
Blood is all over her arm
her best friend come in and finder her lying there
he then takes her to the hospital
hoping he can save her
he gets there and they
say that they cant save her
he goes home and cry's
he cant live without her
he writes a note to his parents and to his girlfriend
then he walked in the rain to the bridge
and jumps of it
his girlfriend did not understand
but his parents did.
They knew why he did it
She was the only person he ever loved.
A contest entry
- The temptations of life by annesall235.
425 points, ended December 10, 2008, 25 entries
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This poem literally made me cry (a very hard thing to do) It is a little rough around the edges but that doesn't matter when you have a write this good, thank you for entering you are in!
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