Ever get the feeling that you are missing something
Like if you are putting together a puzzle
You find you are missing a couple of pieces
That makes you sad that you can't finish
But at the same time it is making you angry
You want to toss it because all effort is lost
This is how I feel sometimes with my heart
I feel like I am missing pieces of it that are now lost forever in memories
Author notes
By Hihamburger (doing this for a contest)
A contest entry
- Broken Sadness by SunDew.
1200 points, ended February 26, 54 entries
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hihamburger
I really like how you wrote this. Yes, I get that feeling a lot; mostly about my childhood.
Thanks for sharing & good luck!
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Thank you so much.
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I just took a look at your profile...I would never have guessed you were 14 from this poem - it sounded like you'd be older. I hope your life becomes better with each & every tomorrow it brings.
Sincerely,
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Thank you again that really means a lot to me.
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now this is really touching i like it alot
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Thank you
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