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My Stranger

And I'm longing, for words to describe how I'm feeling
I'm feeling changed
My world flipped, turned upside down
It turns around, say what's that sound
It's my heart beat, it's getting much louder
My heart beat, is stronger than ever
I'm feeling so alive, I'm feeling so renewed
My hope, is of how beautiful you will be
The beauty of not knowing, It's so much better this way
My tears turn to laughter
I want to hold you, hold you close
Feeling your heartbeat, become one with mine.
Show me the fear, the fear of loving you
And I'm longing, for the perfect word
Longing for a happy moment
So I just breath, breath in this moment
And its perfect to you, for me
You are a stranger to me
But one day you will see, you were ment
Just for me.

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  • charmander13
    December 10, 2008

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    Hope, love, fear..?

    Anyhow, great poem you have here.

    Thank you so much for your entry and all the best to you!

  • rawritsrodney
    December 9, 2008
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    this is so beautiful (