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True Love

Missing image

Ripe fruit in winter

is rare, yet even more rare

is love on the vine.

 

 

 

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A Haiku For You...

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  • So true!

    • Thank you for reading my work, and for sharing your thoughtful comments!!

      I really appreciate all your generous words of praise on my poetry!! Now I'm off to sleep, but I WILL be back to catch up with reading your pages very soon!! Take care, keep your muse's pen flowing, and keep smiling!!
      Peace & Hugs,
      xx Cyn xx


  • Desire gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    Oh My~

    This is one tasty Haiku Beautiful~
    Love how You expressed this, Powerful emotion
    I could so picture Your words coming to Life-
    Powerful imagery!! Woot!
    Excellent!!~
    Congratulations on Your HM!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~

  • SoulWhispher
    December 11, 2008

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    This speaks volumes in just a few short words, this should be a gold winner, truly amazing, love with peace and blessings John


  • chilali
    December 11, 2008

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    Wow. Amazing 15 words Cynthia! I love this! Love it, love it, love it! This is truly beautiful. I entered a contest with the same image as the prompt and won Silver. If you had entered, you would have definitely won gold! Because that is what this poem is. Great work. Keep it flowing

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Jesann gold member
    December 10, 2008
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    Very well said.
    A great take on the pic prompt.


  • Quiet places
    December 10, 2008
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    Excellent

    Ever so true. A wonderful piece. Great job. Don


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 10, 2008

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    , there is nothing more i can say, something golden my friend, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Maxboy gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Rare and beautiful as are your words.

    Best wishes in the contest


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      December 9, 2008
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      Thank you for your thoughtful comments!!!

      As always, I appreciate the visit to my pages and the kudos, too!!! I'm still trying to make my way over your way, don't give up on me... I just had a brainstorm to edit the poem, Ocean Wind, so there I was, trying to spell... Thanks again, and take care!!


  • Alyzeh
    December 9, 2008

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    Wow. Superb 15 words Cynn. This is a beauty! Very strong thoughts, you did ten times better than me on this one.
    Loved it. All the very best to you in the contest.

    Love
    Alyzeh

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      December 9, 2008

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      Thank you!!!

      I found this image in a contest you had entered, and I LOVE it!!! This image is so rare - ripe fruit in winter. Like love. Thanks again, you're becoming my # 1 fan, Girrrl!!!! Keep on keeping on... Peace, hugs & luv always, xx Cyn


      • Alyzeh
        December 9, 2008
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        Hehe. Sweet. I'm glad and no worries there because I already am a fan Cynn!

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