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Just One Question

She asked just one question
but it was one he could not
answer

For she asked him when
did their love up and
Disappear

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Disappear

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  • StormyDawn
    February 18

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    Really nice write. I liked it a lot, and thanks for the comment on "One Day". Keep penning brilliance


  • Captain Jenny
    December 10, 2008

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    Oh, supurb. This nearly had me in tears. Every single letter holds so much emotion. Thank you for entering...

    ~Lae, Feu Tempete