She asked just one question
but it was one he could not
answer
For she asked him when
did their love up and
Disappear
Author notes
Disappear
A contest entry
- Word Prompt by Captain Jenny.
600 points, ended December 20, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Really nice write. I liked it a lot, and thanks for the comment on "One Day". Keep penning brilliance
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Oh, supurb. This nearly had me in tears. Every single letter holds so much emotion. Thank you for entering...
~Lae, Feu Tempete


