Attention to details
will stand you well
as my love lingers
for only a timed spell...
Unless of course you
wrap it with your love
for such a course of action
we'll be honored from above.
Together we can procure it
thus causing it to last
according to the true book
our love can and will hold fast.
But, if we miss our kisses
if in my eyes you do not gaze
if words of love expressions
never gets through the maze.
Then we can expect disaster
tempests and so much more
we can't do that next level
if we don't address the core.
Author notes
My love is like a flower, it may forget to bloom, if you ignore it...Unknown.
A contest entry
- My love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 23, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ah..the crux of the love is described here especially in the last line is the most powerful truth..a great touch..thansk for sharing it..
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Love nurtured, and cherished as very highly valued comes forth in your words...How well penned! Excellent rhyme and flow....Beautiful
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Thank you so very much for these words
lol
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very well done...this poem fits perfectly on the given prompt...truly we should act and do more if we like to keep our 'oath to love'...good luck!
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Thank you so much for stopping by and signing off on this one, its kind of special to me
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