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Duet in 9 Stanzas

I love you to distraction dear.
Let us make that point quick and clear.
Who else is here between my arms
to trap me with her female charms?

Your eyes that glow enchanting green,
the loveliest I've ever seen,
you're my Diana, morning sun,
and Aphrodite all in one.

Goddess divine, grant my request.
Lay your smile upon my chest.
Let my hands intercede for me
and show why I have chosen thee.

I long to be as one with you.
This urge is strong, it must be true.
I want you in an aching way,
so let us love till night is day.

Oh noble knight of written word,
most lovely voice I've ever heard:
You keep me here with stormy eyes,
your gaze gives birth to butterflies.

Your hands are magic 'gainst my skin.
This feels so good it can't be sin.
Time slows down beneath your kisses,
best of all my hundred wishes.

Call me Saffron!  Call me Lover!
I shall answer to none other:
It is my heart your voice enchants,
while your fingers upon me dance.

Stars are flashing behind my eyes,
stars explode from between your thighs.
Yet still we reach for more and more.
Inhibitions thrown on the floor.

I need you in me 'fore 'tis done.

I want inside you, lovely one.
Yet we cannot.  I promised you.
I love you still.  I love you too.

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for Matthew, with love.

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  • azlyn gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    The rhymes here are so wonderful! That does not always work with erotic...but this works very well.


  • NiurTarow
    December 9, 2008
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    bah! So puffy, to use a friend's term. But I love it, so there.