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Ultimate's win--------

When I  smell fragrance around
like  burning of incense dhoop sticks
I feel your presence
in and around my deep thoughts

Though my desires have gone dry
your shower of grace and kindness
seed breathings in me
to allow me to live long

In the garden of flowers
my devotion towards you
blooms day in and day out
and my dedication chants your pious name

I swim in streams of ecstasy
when I  read more about you ad your deeds
I am sure, you pluck out all weeds
that grow in me like evil thoughts

My love is never a blemished one
and  sure of its ultimate's win

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 12, 2008

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    amen..I love the affirmness of the emotions which ensure the beauty and the love of the enchanting relationship..love it..well done..and thanks..