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Brilliant obscure minds

 
The meticulously crafted reputation
Conjured by brilliant obscure minds
Conceals the injustice of the nation
A veiled ancient secret no one finds
When he or she proceeds to believe
The deceit diffused across centuries
Causing anguish and incredible grief
That seemed to force it to its knees
While no drop of the victims’ blood
Fell from the priests of the evil God
Worshippers of the brutal alien race
That was exiled from an aloof space
To genetically engineer a new breed
For them to pervert and manipulate
To desecrate with their unholy seed
And inundate with treason and hate
In order to casually maintain control
Over each misled and wounded soul
They ordained to rule in their name
Leaders in businesses and in politics
Summoned to play their filthy game
Packed with treason and dirty tricks
Abhorrence without any reservation
Imparted by the nasty traitor nation


 

Author notes


http://terrarosso.com/Poem-Brilliant%20obscure%20minds.htm


http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moloch

http://encyclopedia2.thefreedictionary.com/Molech

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Topheth

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hinnom

http://www.occult-advances.org/nc-prophecy-lucifer-fallen-angel.shtml

http://www.crystalinks.com/nephilim.html





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  • neverdie
    January 10
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    well you are wise...


  • guardianhost gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    Gods, Faiths, practices...

    I found your write interesting and thought provoking. I liked the ending message. The manipulation of mankind.

    Life is filled with choices and so it seems religion is just another. I am glad I chose one personally with a happy ending.


  • myrataal silver member
    December 11, 2008

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    I think you NEVER miss something Chris!

    But for some reason I missed this poem ... It did not show on my screen ... I had difficulties yesterday to open poems on here ...

    Once again you pointed out the dangers of ignorance. God Himself said: My nation comes to a fall because they lack knowledge. In Biblical terms Faith is, firstly, a sure KNOWLEDGE about God and his Promises and secondly, a secured trust that all our sins are forgiven by Jesus the Christ, our Saviour.

    In His time we will be fully enlightened.

    Thank you, Chris, for your perseverance.

    Blessed be.
    Myra

  • avatar1957
    December 10, 2008

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    Return the favor,raising our level of awareness is just what earth walkers are called to do.
    Many if will, in turn, activist will arise to the occassion to dispell all lies. We earth walkers are called to save Gaia(Mother Earth) We so have strayed, if all was just fine then why? is our world in the condition it is in? We continue to decline on all levels
    Thank you, I can truly tell you read my poe
    Avatar1957


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    harmony,
    how do we create it, first awareness is needed,
    to see clearly two sides of the coin, but to stay on the right side, we are entwined with both, do we separate or simply acknowledge what makes up humanity, we can clearly see the evil in the world but can we see it in ourselves and can we see how we create, pointing fingers at evil is like adding  fire to the flame it grows and spreads, so what do we do, we become aware of it inside ourselves and choose very carefully because just as we know evil, evil knows us. we can point straight at the evilest in the world but how did they get that way, there is the answer, they built it up in themselves, they chose unaware at first and as it grows it consumes them and they have no idea they are being controlled, and this my friend is the cycle of humanity. we can use different words to say the same, but they are only pointers.

    outrage and angers creates itself, conflict creates conflict

    and yes my friend the meek will indeed inherit the earth.

    God bless you...

     


  • Lowell Poe
    December 10, 2008

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    Why is it that everyone knows evil,
    we are warned about ,
    we are taught to protect ourselves from it,
    we are lectured of it's decisiveness.
    But when it is upon us,
    and the wise ring the bell of it's arrival,
    they are shunned.
    Leads me to thinking that our so called leaders work for the oncoming darkness..and when it arrives they will say this is not what they spoke of...
    so it can ensconce itself in our very soul.
    Insightful and very intense as usual.

    Where is all your wonderful work my brother...?
    I do not see previous works that i have read on your page.
    I hope they were not thrown by the wayside.
    Your work has always intrigue me.

    Lowell Poe.


  • Blueskywonder
    December 10, 2008

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    Ooh... now this is contraversial

    Yes, everything suggests we are trapped inside the illsions of a psycho-logical pyramid. Everything now based on its structure. Mislead and spoon-fed we are decieved. There was a time when evil was not practiced, cultivated or nurtured. Only an evil mind would create such a concept. A time when consciousness was aligned to natural creation. I'm not saying people didn't have faults but they did not try to contradict or even assert their abbility to percieve and create on the natural way of things and i believe that it what they percieved evil to be. They did not compromise the experience of future generations by competing for significance because there was only one level of being. Then some-one came up with a male god. wiping out anciant practice and tradition which gave us (individualy) a connection with natural creation. Confining our need to feel spiritualy connected to the church; a tomb for spirituality. Diminishing our mature awareness by taking the right to individualy attain a sense of spiritual self away from us. Making it illegal for us to honour our ancestry... the great spirit which resides in all things. They are masters of manipulation. We are trapped within the harmony of a chaos. Harmony because we are not aware, and our behaviour now governed by chaos. Divided by its force.

    Their is so much to say... i thank you for sharing your insights and awareness with us.

    Great poem... as usual, perfect flow and rhyme

    we are but manure
    feeding some-one else's tree
    dominating horizons
    culture lost
    assinilated consiously
    by the books we call our history
    the last two thousand years
    has robbed us of our true liberty
    to live and breath experience
    free

    we are all born into debt
    having to earn our right to exist
    the soul means nothing to a world without one
    money is now the root of everything
    we sacrifice our lives
    feeding a revenous apetite
    which holds to ransom our experience



  • Sandal
    December 10, 2008

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    strongly worded

    Your feeling about these matters is clear, you have chosen words which lay out the story in the strongest terms. There is a force which has manipulated humanity through history and persists to this day. Everything we know is wrong and all power structures are in their hands. This would make the situation hopeless if it were not for the power without force.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Wonderfully Inscribed

    ...and it seems not much has changed since the days of old, as the new lies and alibis come strolling in with updated sin, but I remain hopeful through His eyes of love, for if not for compassion, we'd all have a nice long cook out by the fire-place in the depths of hollow halls where endless days of death pass forevermore. Thanks for staying in the light, I can see ya real good as you are. I admire your wonderful heart that beats tender and true, through your words I can see crystal clearly you are a gift, and you carry much weight upon your shoulders, because you're a soldier of the light, rising up, and taking the fight and believing in what's right. Love ya brother, stay you... Peace, brother Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • Jalalbad gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    such is Light Messenger. I now understand what you were trying to show me . Thank you again for another truth. Pearls of wisdom

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