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Float

Float with me
  upon the ocean waves
        wet with desire
Float with me
  upon the sun's rays
        with heated passion
Float with me
  upon the bright moonglow
        skin flush with arousal
Float with me
  upon the stellar stage
        astral bodies climax
Float with me
  upon the downy clouds
        warm bodies entwined
Float with me
  upon loving hearts
        surrounded in love

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  • The Drifter
    May 27
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    You have painted a beautiful picture with your words!


  • KitLynn
    April 21
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    Beautiful...

    This flows so well and is wonderfully written.


  • geckogirl silver member
    February 24
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    Float with me.. I love how you have used this all the way through...


  • Beret55 silver member
    February 10
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    Another sensual flowing write. Your so good at it.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 10, 2008
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    wonderful and just simply beautiful, that is what i can say about this poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

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