Snow in my face
Lovely walks with the calmest of pace
Children blooming throughout the street
Warming to the fire is quite a treat
Families eat sweet rotisserie turkey
Bobby sits aside and chews on his teriyaki Jerky
Jenny and Tommy stand over the mistletoe
Giggles entreat the thought of two foes
Mother Mary calls to the many ages
As Father Fredrick reads passages of his favorite of pages
All stand to the splendor of the family tree
Taking time to see because Mary had Jesus we are free
A contest entry
- The Virgin Mary by Violinstrings.
650 points, ended December 20, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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another idea
leave mother mary calls your talking about your mother with all her children
"Taking time to see because Mary had Jesus that we are free'
it is perfect for you and this contest
does not lose your meaning of mother mary
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an good idea
is mother mary the about mary the mother of jesus
to fit my contest
edit it to
Mother Mary of Jesus mentioned to the many ages
thanks forthis poem is fresh and new -
Beautiful write, Josie. Wonderful flow, imagery and the piece leaves the reader with a peaceful feeling at the end. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Happy holidays.
Haley Mary
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