We are one within the same burden
Alluring thoughts
Magnetic personalities
Creating tearful rejoices
Bound with a mistaken love
We are souls that are simply misunderstood
Unwanted voices
Casualties of pleasure
Were purely
Lustful companions dying inside the phrase
Friendship
A contest entry
- the best friend that i've ever slept with by sheltered.
700 points, ended December 20, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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good on ya doll
had no idea -
"Casualties of pleasure" was my fave
while i respect succinctness
this could have been tightened further
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Yes we are!
Love,
Amera♥
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i want to fuck the shit out of that dancing icon
i swear
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Beautifully worded and deeply stated for the prompt...how creative and interesting...
Love the ending.
Best to you!
mystic
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Outstanding writing...Where the hell have you been??? I hope all is well. At least you havent lost your touch for writing.. I loved this..
Hope to chat soon..
Love you and miss you my BB..lol
Nor
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