Take my hand; I’ll lay you down,
so gently like my teasing words
whispered secretly in your ear.
You know I long for your touch;
my bare skin quivering in delight,
supple breasts in your firm grasp.
My tongue strokes your warm chest
as you throw your head back with a sigh.
Oh, feel them harden as I taste your nipples,
and trace the line down to your thick prize.
You pull me back and suck my breasts passionately.
Oh God, it feels so good. I want you.
Pushing you away, I straddle your chest
and take your manhood into my mouth.
My swaying hips invite you to fondle me,
explore the folds and depths of my heated cavern.
I tingle with excitement as your tongue flickers.
My head moves up and down in unison with my hips,
and my ecstasy erupts with primordial moans.
You flip me to my knees and plunge yourself deep inside
My orgasm intensifies as you thrust hard and fast,
holding my hair and a shoulder to steady yourself.
Your pace quickens and you grab hold of my ass.
Throwing your head back you let out a loud groan
and cum deep inside of me.
Collapsing together in a sweaty heap, I gaze at you.
Such a gentle, loving man, I think to myself.
So lucky to have found him, even if only in a dream.
In a list
A contest entry
- Personally sensual (or erotic) by The D O M.
1000 points, ended December 22, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Come Have Fun With The Bedroom Boss by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
900 points, ended March 27, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Mmmmmmm
Such a guilty delight. I loved the 69 description nothing like pleasuring and being pleasured at the same time. I also like the dream twist. My dreams are vivid like this as well. Good luck
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Beautiful, I love the twist at the end where you tell the reader where it is just a dream. LoL or at least that's what I got
But this was an incredible write.
Favorite line
"Oh God, it feels so good. I want you.
Pushing you away, I straddle your chest
and take your manhood into my mouth."
Like your talking directly to the reader, ohhh so seductive
~Serenity
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nice
Very vivid and alive. I love the wording and the way the images seem to meld together in sweaty passion. Thank you for your entry and for following my rules
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Awww lovely, wouldn't mind a bit of this kind of intimacy at the moment myself now... Stuey!!!
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Wow, very nice write, make those dreams come true.
Best wishes in the contest
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No reason to be embarrassed at all!!!
This is Hot and sensuous, exactly what I was after, he is a VERY lucky man!!!
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Wow. Very hot. I will be back after I take a very, very cold shower.
Great job. I enjoyed it.
Mike
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You sure did an amazing job my friend. I would never have guessed that you don't write sensual. Good for you for trying something different.
Best of luck in the contest.
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WOW!!
Very sensual, very passionate, very surprising(in a good way!!1) excellent heated piece..now i need to go uhmm..concentrate onuhmm something..
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a finely written passionate poem each word enchants me with lovely images of love
well penned well written
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